Unforgettable Challenges (Second draft of profile)

“Unforgettable Challenges”

The unforgettable challenges in life are the challenges that are still fresh in your mind even today, after so many years.

At the young age of seven in a small village in Portugal, my uncle Rogerio Mendes would wake up every day before the sun would rise. He had a very important mission to accomplish for his nonstop, hard working mother before the beginning of classes at seven-thirty; he had to deliver the freshly baked bread that his mother had made to the customers. A donkey would transport him and the bread to every customer’s house scattered around the village. “After going on the same route day after day the donkey would cry, waking me up when we arrived at the destination.” he says with a laugh. As my uncle Rogerio got older, he faced some serious challenges that he will never forget.

            In the year 1959, at the age of eleven, my uncle stopped attending school and started working in a factory producing bricks. His days at the factory were cut short when he accidentally broke a mold resulting in a life changing day. My uncle’s boss told him he had to pay three thousand escudos for it, at that time it was a fortune. “Thoughts were going through my head; I would have to work for the rest of my life to relieve myself from debt. I had to run away.” he recalls. The following day he packed a change of clothes and waited until everyone left the house to run away. His destination: Spain because he heard many times that there was work available in the coal mines. Rogerio walked many miles to the neighboring country of Spain. He rested a while in a tavern where an older man recognized him and asked my uncle what he was doing in Spain. He responded that he was going to work. The man told my uncle that he was under age to work in the coal mines and proposed that he worked at his farm. “I agreed because it was something to begin with. The farmer and his family took me under their wing. They kindly provided me with food, housing, and a small salary.” he says with satisfaction. The family treated him like a new member of the family. My uncle was very lucky; he stated: “They were my second family, though I still kept in touch with my own family back home. . . .I stayed there happily for ten years.”

            At the age of twenty-one, my uncle’s mother notified him that he was required to serve in the army. My uncle had no other choice, he went to Africa. The war involved the countries of Angola, Mozambique, and Guinea; for the purpose of keeping these three countries as Portuguese colonies. He served in Guinea for two years, from 1970 until 1972. One hundred and fifty soldiers were in my uncle’s group, and my uncle adds that the group watched out for each other.  “War was not always sad, people got shot, but we tried to think of the positive to keep ourselves going,” he said with bravery. Rogerio was in charge of the heavy guns, such as a bazooka, and when needed he used his pistol. The conditions of the war were not easy, sometimes they had no water to drink, they had to eat rice every day, and the soldiers slept in a trench four feet deep which they poked holes to keep an eye out for attackers.

            Many humid, hot and restless nights the soldiers would try to entertain themselves by drinking beer and playing the small wooded guitars. Some soldiers, like my uncle, would take the new born animals that were in the jungle and raise them; they had dogs, monkeys, squirrels, and a cheetah. “I had a small dog that was better than any soldier. Quito (the dog’s name) would tell if anyone or anything was coming from near or far” my uncle said proudly. Some nights the soldiers got drunk and one of those nights my uncle woke up the next day with a tattoo on his arm, “It was a drunken mistake,” he laughingly explained. The tattoo, done by my uncle himself is a snake wrapped around a sword which symbolized nothing at the time, but now has a long history behind it. Though he was million miles away, he kept in touch with his family and his second family in Spain.

At the end of 1972, my uncle was shipped back to Portugal. He stayed there for two months then followed his family’s footsteps to America to start a new chapter of his life.  Today my uncle is married, has two daughters, and a beautiful granddaughter. Many times he brings up the stories of his past challenges. These challenges made him stronger and made him who he is today. My uncle Rogerio values his life more and enjoys the little things in life.

             

Post Write:

-          I feel like my paper identifies an interesting to me and hopefully to others. I interviewed my uncle that has gone through many challenges in life, what makes him who he is today. I provided my profile with small anecdotes like when my uncle was eleven and ran away to the neighbor country of Spain to work in the coal mines. I used quotations that I thought would flow with my writing; I put the quotation “It was a drunken mistake” to give the reader the image what my uncle Rogerio would say if he/she meet him in person.

-          I don’t know what else I can do to make my profile better. I have completed all the requirements. I included a thesis statement which is “As my uncle Rogerio got older, he faced some serious challenges that he will never forget.” I added some quotations from my subject, “Thoughts were going through my head; I would have to work for the rest of my life to relieve myself from debt. I had to run away.” I believe my profile flows from fact to fact.  

-          1) Is my profile on my uncle interesting?

 2)Is there an area I still need to work on, that was not clear?